The essay that i plan to revise is my ad analysis essay. My strengths were my attention to detail when analyzing in the paper and my evidence given. My weaknesses though were my somewhat weak thesis and forgetting some important things in the ad.
To revise my essay I will start with making a stronger claim for my thesis. Doing this can help me focus on making stronger points and relate back to the thesis more with analysis. I will also make sure to look over the ad again to see what I missed that I can add to my paper. The more details and information i give, the easier it is for the audience to picture what I am talking about.
I am also going to revise my introduction and conclusion. those are always my weaknesses. Having a better introduction and conclusion will help me keep my paper focused more. It will also engage the reader more.
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